The Broken Pearl Necklace
So I came across the post Picture it & Write and here’s my version of it

Sorry dear mother , our shadows do not coincide
Inherited may be your genes , your dreams not so
Forgive my frustration , patiently waiting to erupt
When I broke your necklace , it was far too much
I associate with black , do not drown me in pink
Eight a princess , eighteen rather an assassin
Gloves of leather , not lace , my trembling toes
struggle to please you , bored beet cheeks
are flaring from self hatred , not feminine fragility.
Thick roots have grown , but branches my own
Stop directing them , I do not wish to deform
myself for you , my sympathy at your loss is true
Ambition urges me towards roads abandoned by you
I plead for freedom , my sacrifice bleeds dry
Must I fouetté myself out of this , mother ?
Let swans be swaddled , eagles are extensive
Tonight the stars constellate for my performance
Empty is the dance floor , but brimming are my goals .

This is one of the best things I have read in a while!
well, well, well done.
Tried something different for a change. Thanks for liking it
And The Lady In Pink surprises all :’)
Whats so surprising Mr.Thinker ?
Very well written… So engaging and and heartfelt
Thanks for the visit. Some parts of it were personal so they hit home
This does a brilliant job of tying the picture to Eliabeth’s inspiration! Fantastic!
This is my first attempt of writing a poem about a given topic so I’m glad that you liked it
I’m sure this happens..!
Well done; so well written…
I can relate to it in a way , so it was enjoyable to write.
Thank you
Very good piece!
Thanks
Beautifully written
Thank you
Thanks for contributing. Beautiful writing.
It was my pleasure. Anxiously waiting for the next challenge
ah-mazing! “Ambition urges me to roads abandoned by you” favorite line.
Thanks a lot
I had this poem in school called the road not taken by robert frost , so it clicked and the line is inspired from that. Its a really good poem , you should read it
Cool
Hey, I’ve nominated you for a Liebster Award:)
http://thesarahsector.wordpress.com/2013/03/06/liebster-award/
Nice ! Ive already been nominated once , am I allowed to do another post ? Im a rookie at these award things.
I’m not sure, this was my first award so I’m kind of a rookie too:)!
Oh , well congrats anyways , you deserve it